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Dear HSP
I made this script as kind of horror story. Hope you like it
I used models´ names but the casting is up to you.
FUKA: My friend MAINA lived a long time with her strict aunt. When her aunt passed away, she asked me to sleep with her at her place as she felt very lonely. It was the first time she would be sleeping at her home without her aunt, and she felt uncomfortable.
FUKA: Good night, MAINA.
MAINA: Good night, FUKA. Thank you for staying with me tonight.
(FUKA and MAINA sleep in their futons. Suddenly, MAINA hears a noise and wakes up. She goes to room where the sound comes from. As she enters the room, she is shocked to see her aunt).
MAINA: Auntie? How is it possible?
AUNT: You´ve been a very naughty girl, MAINA. And naughty girls need a spanking remember? (grabs MAINA and forces her to bend over her knee)
MAINA: No, please Auntie. I did nothing wrong.
AUNT: Really? (Uncovers her skirt, exposing sexy panties). You dared to be at my funeral with these filthy panties. Aren´t you ashamed? Looks like I haven´t been strict enough with you. You need to be taught a lesson with a good spanking.
MAINA: Please Auntie, I didn´t mean to disrespect you. I´m sorry.
AUNT (Starts spanking MAINA): You think you got rid of me? And now you´re free to do anything? No, you´re wrong! I´ll make sure I´ll discipline you whenever I feel is necessary.
MAINA: No, stop treating me like that. I´m not a child anymore.
AUNT: Naughty girls are never too old for spanking.
(FUKA heard something and wakes up. She goes to the room where MAINA is and finds MAINA spanking herself, with her eyes closed)
MAINA: I´m sorry, Auntie. I promise I will behave.
(FUKA grabs MAINA and shakes her. MAINA wakes up)
FUKA: MAINA, what´s wrong with you?
MAINA: Please, FUKA, let´s leave this place. Let´s stay at your house. I don´t want to stay here.
(The scene cuts to FUKA´s house. She´s alone with MAINA).
FUKA: MAINA told me what happened. She is now resting at my place until she finds a new place to live. She´s afraid of going back to her aunt´s house. (talks to MAINA). I´ll go shopping now. Itte kimasu.
MAINA: Itterashai!
(MAINA is alone. She´s reading a magazine. She hears a noise and lifts her head. To her horror, she sees her aunt in front of her, with a wicked smile)
AUNT: You´ve been a very naughty girl, MAINA. And naughty girls need a spanking.
END OF PART ONE
PART TWO
(AUNT grabs MAINA and makes her bend over her knee)
AUNT: Now, I´ll discipline you properly. (starts to spank her).
MAINA: Auntie, please, stop, I can´t take it anymore.
AUNT: Shut up and take your punishment.
(YUKA arrives. She had forgotten her purse. She then hears noise and goes see what is going on. She finds MAINA spanking herself. She tries to wake her. Then she sees her aunt. She goes to meet her face to face).
FUKA: Why are you doing this to her? Why don´t you leave her alone?
AUNT: I promised her mother I would make her a respectable woman. And I will continue to discipline her even from spiritual world. She wore filthy panties. She must be disciplined.
FUKA: You know what I think? You enjoy punishing her. You´re mean.
AUNT: Watch how you talk to me. It was you who has become a bad influence over her. But if you care so much for her, are you willing to take a punishment for her?
(FUKA looks at MAINA who´s lying on the floor)
FUKA: If I do, will you leave her forever?
AUNT: I will.
FUKA: What do you want me to do?
AUNT (points at a table): I want you to bend over that table and take the punishment I will give you.
FUKA: How many smacks will I get?
AUNT: That´s up to me to decide. We will see what gets tired first: my hand or your bottom.
FUKA: What happens if I can´t take the punishment?
AUNT (smiling wickedly): You don´t want to know…
FUKA (trying to hide her fear): All right, let´s do it.
AUNT: I admire your courage. But I won´t be easy on you…
(FUKA bends over the table and takes a spanking from MAINA´s Aunt. Before we see the end, we cut to MAINA, who wakes up and finds FUKA trying to ease the pain in her bottom. Aunt is nowhere to be seen.)
MAINA: FUKA, are you all right? What happened?
FUKA: I made a deal with your aunt. I took a punishment for you. But she will never torment you again.
MAINA: You did that? For me? (Hugs FUKA and starts crying) Oh, thank you, I´m so happy I have you as a friend.
(FUKA smiles to the camera with the same wicked smile as MAINA´s aunt…)
THE END
2022/06/29(水) 06:07 No.4184 EDIT DEL
HSP(Webmaster)
Dear Customer,

Thank you for posting your idea. That sounds interesting.
It seems to be difficult to shoot it soon due to circumstances, but I will consider it with much interest. Regards, hsp
2022/06/29(水) 11:52 No.1 EDIT DEL
Sai
Dear HSP
I´m glad you enjoyed my horror story. I wrote an ending which is a little ambiguous. But one possibility is a more Ringu-style ending:
MAINA: You did that? For me? (Hugs FUKA and starts crying) Oh, thank you, I´m so happy I have you as a friend.(MAINA then realizes she is hugging her Aunt. Horrified she pulls back and tries to run to the door but can´t open it. She turns around and sees FUKA)
FUKA (with the Aunt´s same wicked smile and voice): You´ve been a very naughty girl, MAINA. And naughty girls need a spanking...
THE END
2022/07/02(土) 05:36 No.2 EDIT DEL
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